3DSVR-1425 - [VR] Akari Shibuya "If you want me to write about it, please satisfy me..." I, a new editor in charge, was seduced by an erotic novelist and liberal arts lady who whispers dirty words to me and then writes me off.

It felt more like high school students having sex for the first time, rather than the established setting. I think a younger character who's just really curious about sex would have fit better than an older sister type. If you're going for an S character, you need to be more assertive – not asking "Do you want to?" but giving commands like "Do it!" And why does she wipe off all that sweat when she's drenched in it during face-to-face? I don't know if it's not in the script or if she's just taking a break, but they'll write about being sweaty and then spray on fake oil... why not use real sweat? This director just keeps making flops. I was hoping for something amazing.

The glasses are the whole point of this, and the director takes them off after just 3 minutes? Seriously lacking in sense. And the fellatio... it's like she doesn't even *want* to do it. She just licks it a bit, barely puts it in her mouth, and spits it out immediately. You can tell she hates fellatio, and it just kills the mood.

I preferred the angle where the actor's hands weren't as visible, but there were too many unnecessary shots, which was a shame. 3.5 stars. In the face-to-face seating, the actress is almost completely leaning back. A flop of a director (Wet Puppy).