DASS-766 - I want a charming relationship, but I can't help but moan. If my inner voice could be heard, even I, an unremarkable person, could have affairs. Kuramoto Sumire.

I was thinking, 'What is he doing, revealing his inner thoughts?' It's just awful. There's no way it would naturally develop like that in the first place, and it's a total mood killer. Instead, I think it would have been better if Sumire, upon learning this, got angry, snatched the hearing aid, chased the man away, and then later gave the hearing aid to her husband, asking him to atone for his sins by saying, 'Mess me up!' And the tone of Sumire's inner voice is also a bit too harsh, right? Well, maybe it's okay. This… could be developed into something like, 'A man who obtains a hearing aid that can hear inner thoughts, glasses with a sensitivity belt, and glasses that can see HP, challenges beautiful women on the street with, 'Entry fee is 20,000 yen. But if you can get up immediately after the H is over, I'll give you 1 million yen!' He mercilessly knocks them all unconscious, enjoys himself, and earns some pocket money,' or 'A captured investigator. 100% hit rate on the sensitivity belt! Continuous orgasm from pleasure and then unconsciousness! Now I can't escape the organization. No, I don't want to escape!' Please make something like that. Ah, Sumire's reaction itself was top-notch as expected, but it didn't feel *too* suggestive. It's unavoidable since the purpose is to make her feel good. While she was expressing it a little, maybe a cuter moan would have been better until the middle of the first H? It felt like it suddenly jumped to almost top gear. It would be better to add more contrast, like 'I was surprised to be attacked exactly how I wanted, and from the confusion and joy of the climax, I couldn't hold back and let out a wild scream!'.