TKD-041 - 筆おろしは僕の憧れの叔母さん 加藤ツバキ

The protagonist starts from rock bottom: a college dropout and unemployed, he gets caught masturbating with his aunt's underwear, gets scolded by another aunt, and is exposed to his father, only to be protected by the aunt he admires. Naturally, he leaves in shame. When the aunt follows him and they are alone, the jump to 'It's okay just for tonight, right?' feels too rushed. If his virginity is revealed later, it would have been more natural for her to ask if he's a virgin first, then say, 'If you're okay with me, I'll teach you. But promise me it's only for tonight.' After the act, the aunt falls asleep without returning to her room, which felt odd since she said she'd be right back—what if someone checked on her? The protagonist says he doesn't want to sleep, but they just spend the night together doing nothing but fantasizing. It would have been better if he tried to push her, only for her to prove she's one step ahead. The ending with the internal ejaculation and a light kiss isn't bad, but it would have been better if, after the act, they had a dialogue like: 'I-I'm sorry, it felt so good,' '...No, don't worry. It felt good for me too,' 'Tsubaki-san,' 'Junpei-kun, you got good in just one night. But this is only for tonight. Good luck with your interview,' followed by a kiss and him heading to the interview with a positive attitude. Also, giving him a 'congratulations on the job' gift through his father before the interview even happens feels a bit premature. By the way, it would have been better if there was used underwear included. Well, despite minor complaints, Tsubaki-san's seductive performance made up for everything. It was a wonderful work—elegant, cute, and erotic.